Talk:Carry On (Supernatural)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Soaper1234 (talk · contribs) 00:01, 23 March 2021 (UTC)

Hello. I'm going to review this article. My comments are below. Soaper1234 - talk  00:01, 23 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The plot mentions a song being played, so should this be mentioned in the infobox?


 * Sam → Sam Winchester
 * Wouldn't that sound repetitive? "Sam and Dean Winchester" sounds better than "Sam Winchester and Dean Winchester".
 * Yeah, happy to let that go.


 * Add a comma after together
 * Expanded sentence so no longer necessary.
 * The new clause in the sentence is not mentioned - or sourced - anywhere in the article.
 * ✅ Removed.


 * Add "to the show" after conclusion


 * Merge final sentence into the second paragraph.

Plot

 * Characters need wikilinking and full names on first mention.
 * All characters need actors in parenthesis.
 * Missed Bobby's surname.
 * Missed Bobby's surname.
 * Missed Bobby's surname.


 * Context for characters and things such as "Roadhouse" and "the Impala" is needed in the plot.
 * Need context for who Castiel, Jack Kline, Rufus Turner, John Winchester, and Mary Winchester are.
 * Need context for who Castiel, Jack Kline, Rufus Turner, John Winchester, and Mary Winchester are.


 * Perhaps only link the "14 years prior" bit.


 * Remove "in Heaven" from final line.

Production

 * Add "cast members" before Jared Padalecki


 * The longest-running show fact needs a source.


 * Add "Showrunner and executive producer" before Andrew Dabb.


 * Change "the March 23 episode" to "episode 13 of the season, broadcast on March 23".


 * Change "shutdown due to the virus outbreak" to "shutdown in production".

Reception

 * It is very quote-heavy, so can you paraphrase some bits?