Talk:Cartman's Mom Is a Dirty Slut/GA1

GA Review
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Hello. I'll be reviewing this article. Check out Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 for how I'm going to be organizing this. Let's start.  The Flash  {talk} 00:44, 20 October 2009 (UTC)

Lead

 * ""Cartman's Mom Is a Dirty Slut" is the 13th and finale episode of South Park's first season, it first aired[...]" -> "[...]first season. It first[...]"
 * "He discovers that his father is most likely a man, his mother[...]" -> "[...]a man his mother[...]"
 * Wikilink to David A. Goodman
 * "The episode met with positive responses[...]" -> "[...]was met with positive[...]"

Plot

 * Can you make the transition from Kenny, Kyle, and Stan filming Cartman to Cartman wondering about his father flow better?
 * Wikilink to Denver Broncos

Production

 * I'm not liking the quality of File:Jay Leno (1993) by Alan Light.jpg - be better to replace it with File:JayLeno.jpg or
 * Wikilink to David A. Goodman, once more
 * It would be better just to put a section called "References," with the book, and make the current one "notes" - then make all book references simply Weinstock
 * I quite confused with the wording for the guest appearance. It doesn't flow well. Can you clear it up and explain why Clooney's appearance is important.
 * "[...]the song used at "The Drunken Barn Dance", Walters was romantically[...]" -> "[...]"The Drunken Barn Dance." Walters was[...]"
 * "However, instead of continueing the episode's[...]" -> "of continuing"

Theme

 * "Thus confirming a theory by Paul Cantor[...]" -> "This confirmed[...]"

Release and reception

 * "[...]the United States on cable television channel Comedy Central[...]" -> "[...]on the cable television channel[...]"
 * Move the complete week marathon ratings to before the Canada info.
 * This seems more logic to me, as the episode was broadcast before the average could be computed.-- Music 26/  11  11:29, 22 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Season two's best episodes? Don't you mean season one?
 * "In a top ten, compiled by Chicago Tribune reporter Allan Johnson, regarding South Park's best episodes[...]" -> "In a top ten list of South Park episode[...]"

Images

 * Just that one I mentioned in Production.  The Flash  {talk} 00:44, 20 October 2009 (UTC)

Final say

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Nice work. I've gone ahead and passed it - thanks for taking care of my issues :)  The Flash  {talk} 21:59, 22 October 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Nice work. I've gone ahead and passed it - thanks for taking care of my issues :)  The Flash  {talk} 21:59, 22 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Nice work. I've gone ahead and passed it - thanks for taking care of my issues :)  The Flash  {talk} 21:59, 22 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Took care of the issues you pointed out.-- Music 26/  11  11:35, 22 October 2009 (UTC)