Talk:Caryodendron orinocense/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 19:53, 9 April 2020 (UTC) I'll have a go at this one. Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:53, 9 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments
This is a well-organized and well-cited article on a tree species.


 * "used for nutritional and cosmetic purposes" - why not say "is edible, and can be used in cosmetics".
 * ✅. Change to "which is edible and is also used in cosmetics."


 * Image captions don't need a "." at the end unless they are full sentences (5 to remove).


 * "nut by-products" - this means the pressed cake once the oil has been extracted? Better say so.


 * "high contents in proteins" - "high content of proteins" might be better.


 * "even when the plan shows callus growth" - does "plan" mean "cutting" here? Better say so.
 * That was a spelling mistake. "plan" means "plant". Corrected.


 * "an allurement for bees" - perhaps "to attract bees".
 * ✅. Changed to "Furthermore, the tree also attracts bees through the nectar excreted from its leaves, aiding in the tree's pollination."


 * "autochthonous" - I did Greek but many readers won't have. I think we usually use "resident" here.


 * "displays a dense and leafy crown" should be "has a dense and leafy crown".


 * "The species displays recalcitrant seed," - better would be "The seeds are recalcitrant," linked as now.
 * ✅. Changed to "The species' seeds are recalcitrant"


 * " exhibits periodic shedding" should be "is periodically shed".


 * I'm a bit doubtful about the 'Ecological value' section: don't these advantages apply to almost ANY local tree species? It's an error to claim specific benefits when general benefits are all that apply.
 * Reduced scope of "ecological value" section to retain specificity to only this species, and not to all indigenous trees. Let me know if you agree with these changes.


 * Images: all fine. Nice to see your own photos in service!

That's about it from me.
 * Sorry that it's taking me a bit of time. I'll get it done by EOD Friday.CPC273 (talk) 03:26, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Glad to hear it, thanks for letting me know. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:47, 17 April 2020 (UTC)


 * All changes complete. Let me know if you agree with the changes. Thanks! CPC273 (talk) 21:18, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for the work, and the fine article. Promoting now. I do hope you'll feel able to take the time to review one or two articles from the GAN queue. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:12, 18 April 2020 (UTC)