Talk:Cas and Jonesy

Suggestions for the lead
To me, the lead still reads clunky. This is how I would write it:

Cas and Jonesy are an Australian duo known for being explorers, endurance athletes, motivational speakers, as well as a writer and documentary producer respectively. Their given names are James John Castrission (born 14 March 1982) and Justin Roderick Jones (born 20 June 1983).

The duo have appeared on numerous television programs, including....

They have completed numerous endurance events, including the longest unsupported polar expedition [you'll need to say who says it's the longest, it can't be a self-reported thing. if it is, just omit this sentence and describe the expedition]. They walked from the edge of Antarctica to the South Pole and back without assistance. After 89 days they made it back to the coast, having skied 2275 km carrying all of their supplies behind them.[1][2]

^I think this flows a little better as a lead. :-) Bali88 (talk) 16:47, 20 September 2014 (UTC)

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