Talk:Casino Royale (novel)

Unofficial PR
,, , , As I already have something at PR at the moment, I cannot start a second one, so would you gents mind commenting on this article, which I've given a dust up and re-write recently. I think it may be there-or-thereabouts for an FA, but any and all comments would be appreciated. Cheers – SchroCat (talk) 21:08, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Gladly. I've got two other (formal) PRs already on my to-do list but will be here as soon as I can.  Tim riley  talk    21:18, 22 January 2015 (UTC)

Not much from me: That's my lot. This is a fine article, beautifully researched.  Tim riley  talk    11:24, 23 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Comments from Tim riley
 * Titles of newspapers: "the Daily Express" and "the Daily Mail" but "The Sunday Times". Consistency wanted.
 * You've got Blanchard's advice in twice.
 * "He used well-known brand names and everyday details to support a sense of realism" – according to Rupert Hart-Davis, a close friend of Peter Fleming, it wasn't so much the sense of realism as blatant product placement: "when Ian Fleming mentions any particular food, clothing or cigarettes in his books, the makers reward him with presents in kind … Ian's are the only modern thrillers with built-in commercials."
 * The Waller ref is fine, but if you prefer I can substitute the original source.   Tim riley  talk    22:32, 23 January 2015 (UTC)
 * That would be great if you could, thanks! - SchroCat (talk) 22:36, 23 January 2015 (UTC)
 * "Semiotician" – blue link wanted, I think. Being semi-idiotic I can never remember what the word means.
 * "I thought by God, (James Bond) is" – square not rounded brackets wanted here, I'd say.
 * "both American singer Hoagy Carmichael" – false title, my bête noir.
 * "learns not to do his job because of principals" – I think you mean "principles" here.
 * Many thanks, Tim! It's hugely appreciated, as always. Cheers - SchroCat (talk) 15:50, 24 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Crisco
 * Lead feels heavy on the adaptations, light on the creative process
 * "The bitch is dead now." - As a direct quotation, should be referenced
 * Chemin de Fer - worth a link?
 * slice in two the testicles of British wartime agents - slice the testicles ... in half, perhaps?
 * Is the price really necessary? Most of our FAs on literature don't include it
 * 4,728 copies of Casino Royale were printed, selling out in less than a month - shouldn't start a sentence with a numeral
 * a breathtaking plot - schoolboy stuff - isn't this rather inconsistent?
 * Casino Royale was the first James Bond novel to be adapted as a daily comic strip which was published in The Daily Express and syndicated worldwide. - ambiguous whether or not this is "the first James Bond novel to be adapted as a daily comic strip" or "the first James Bond novel to be adapted as a daily comic strip published in The Daily Express and syndicated worldwide". Suggest restructuring — Crisco 1492 (talk)


 * Cheers Crisco - much appreciated. All done, bar the lead, which I'll work on shortly, per your suggestion. - SchroCat (talk) 17:15, 24 January 2015 (UTC)


 * (subscription needed) is generally not part of the title. We have templates like Subscription required which can be used. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:42, 29 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Cassianto
 * I figured that as the article was that good and because of and  irritatingly good comments, it would be easier to give things a light copy edit instead of posting my measly nitpickings!  Just one observation: What are the rules of past and present tense?  Personally, I'm a fan of using the former, but I may be completeley wrong in doing so. Do we go on the fact that whoever we are talking about is dead or alive?  I have also left a few hidden comments, just in case you missed them.  Feel free to adopt or disregard at your leisure; you've done the article much justice in your revamp.  Nice job!   Cassianto Talk   20:42, 24 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Cheers Cass - and good to see you back again (hopefully permanently!) I'll have a spin through for your comments and mull over the past/present tense - it's always a balance between common sense and consistency, but we'll see what the FAC reviewers make of things! Cheers, as always - SchroCat (talk) 22:53, 24 January 2015 (UTC)


 * non im timere, I'm hoping for mid-March, but even then it could be delayed until June. I'll still be about for small things though.   Cassianto Talk   09:00, 25 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Comments from Brianboulton


 * Lead
 * May I suggest that, to avoid the intrusive quote marks around "Secret Service", you introduce your protagonist as "the British secret agent James Bond" – which also confirms Bond's nationality among the varied cosmopolitan cast that you then introduced
 * If it's possible, I'd get rid of "in order to", which always blights good prose.
 * I'd say "reflected" rather thsn "included" many of Fleming's personal tastes.
 * Rather than "was adapted as a comic strip" I'd say "has appeared as...", which standardises the tenses and avoids the "adapted" repetition
 * All done. – SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Plot
 * Slightly bemused by the citation – they don't normally appear in plot synopses
 * That's true for the summary in general, but quotes (which should only be used sparingly) should probably carry a citation. - SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Background and writing
 * Perhaps too much "background". The stuff about Fleming's wartime service, and his postwar employment with Kemsleys, is germane to the novel's subject matter and therefore fine, but I can't see much relevance in Ann Charteris's convoluted affairs, and I recommend you take the scissors to most of this detail.
 * Instead, a few words about how Fleming acquired Goldeneye might be more appropriate, since he wrote all his books there.
 * "Describing the work as his "dreadful oafish opus", Fleming had his manuscript re-typed in London by Joan Howe..." This is one of those sentence constructions that used to rouse the ire of Tony1. It's an elision of two unrelated events: Fleming's deprecation of his work, and Miss Howe's typing of it. Various alternatives would work – here's just one: "Back in London, Fleming had his manuscript—which he described as his "dreadful oafish opus"—retyped  by Joan Howe..." (Note: no hyphen in "retyped")
 * "partially based" → "partly based"?
 * All done - SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Style
 * "Benson" needs introductory info. Actually, he has a WP article so you can link him
 * Yap, done (and a very nice chap he is too: I had a chat with him after he complained about my inclusion of an incorrect quote about his books) - SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Plot inspirations
 * Chemin-de-fer capitalised? (Would you, for example, write Poker rather than poker, or "Roulette"?)
 * Done - SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Characters
 * Again I find the quotes round "Secret Service" distracting. I suppose the point is that there is no actual organisation that holds this title. But it is a popular nickname for the Intelligence services, and I'd be inclined to de-quote it.
 * "Lycett sees much of Bond's character as being much "wish fulfilment" by Fleming" – rephrase to avoid "much...much"
 * "...Aleister Crowley, whose physical features are similar to Le Chiffre's" Hmm, Crowley was a real person – whose physical features were similar to those of a fictitious one? Needs turning round, e.g. "...Aleister Crowley, on whose physical features Fleming based Le Chiffre's". I would end the overlong sentence at this point, and continue: "Crowley's tastes, especially in sado-masochism, were also ascribed to Le Chiffre;  as Fleming's biographer Henry Chancellor notes, "when Le Chiffre goes to work on Bond's testicles with a carpet-beater and a carving knife, the sinister figure of Aleister Crowley is there lurking in the background."
 * Yes, all done - SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Britain's position in the world
 * Could you check the wording of the Woolacott/Bennett quote? It's the words "imaginary power" that make nonsense of the sentence as it stands.
 * Embarrassing misquote now corrected. - SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Anglo-American relations
 * "Black" needs proper introduction
 * I'm not sure which   four  MI6 operatives had defected  at this point, but my main problem with this paragraph is again the question of fiction versus fact. The relationship between Bond and Leiter was fictional; to say it was "not mirrored in the wider US-UK association" appears to give  it factual status. I  would reword: "...did not reflect the reality of the US-UK relationship".
 * The Amis quotation, despite the ellipses, ought to parse, which it does not at present.
 * All tweaked. (I'll add a footnote to cover who had defected shortly) – SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Treachery and fifth columnists
 * "Chancellor sees in Casino Royale that the defections showed the moral ambiguity of the cold war, which was reflected in the novel". I'm not sure that this makes sense as written – I can't figure it out anyway. I think it needs rewriting, perhaps to something simpler, e.g. "Chanceller sees the moral ambiguity of the cold war reflected in the novel".
 * Done - SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Good versus evil
 * "Benson considered" (past) and Parker "agrees" (present). I'd use the present tense consistentlt; both writers are reasonably contemporary
 * "The subject was also dealt with the academic Beth Butterfield..." A "by" missing?
 * "point of view" → "viewpoint"?
 * More rewriting necessary: "In light of the Bond's conversation" should presumably be "In the light of Bond's conversation". Also, I think "until he learns not to do his job because of principles..." etc would be better as "to the point where he does his job not because of principles, but to pursue personal battles".
 * Yes, all done - SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Publication history
 * "hardcover" – isn't the Brit idiom "hardback"? I've not seen "hardcover" in a British publishing context. Also the clash with "cover" in the same line could be avoided.
 * "Fleming himself" – or just "Fleming"?
 * Tweaked. – SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Critical reception
 * The verb "critique" is not normally used in the sphere of book criticism, more in the evaluation of research papers etc, so I'd reconsider this usage.
 * All sorted now – SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Adaptations
 * Just a couple of minor observations. Your account of the perigrinations of the film rights doesn't say how Sony came by them. And finally, if the Craig film is supposed to depict Bond in his early days, what are we to make of Dame Judi, who inherited the M role relative late in the film sequence yet assumes it here? There probably isn't any answer to that.
 * There isn't to the second point, no. I suspect a lesser person in the role may have been dropped, but you can't rid yourself of La grande dame Dench lightly. As always with the Bond films, there is a great need for the willing suspension of disbelief! I'll cover the first point shortly, when I've dug up a very useful court report from the states that tracked these things. SchroCat (talk) 09:42, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

Anyway, I hope these comments are helful. You can follow in the edit history the several minor amendemnts I've made to the article text. Brianboulton (talk) 21:36, 30 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Many thanks, Brian: hugely helpful, as always. I'll work my way through this and try and cover all your excellent points. Many thanks once again. - SchroCat (talk) 22:19, 30 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Note: for "helful" read helpful" Brianboulton (talk) 10:07, 31 January 2015 (UTC)


 * All comments now dealt with as best I can: a huge debt of thanks to all who took part. – SchroCat (talk) 11:25, 31 January 2015 (UTC)

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Reflections in a Golden Eye?
The article currently states, "...Carson McCullers' 1941 novel Reflections in a Golden Eye, which described the use of British naval bases in the Caribbean by the US Navy." The McCullers' book actually is about goings on between officers and an enlisted man at a Army base in the southern US. It is not about naval bases in the Caribbean. Therefore I question the statement. I do not have access to the current reference to verify it. I think that statement ought to be removed unless it can be verified. --Zeamays (talk) 17:51, 26 May 2017 (UTC)
 * The novel certainly doesn't deal with the US Navy using British bases in the Caribbean. It's set wholly on a pre-war US Army base in Georgia, has nothing to do with the Navy and was written well before the UK-US destroyers-for-bases deal was concluded in mid-1941. Khamba Tendal (talk) 20:33, 4 January 2024 (UTC)

A recent digital reissue of the original edition
claims that the American publications of the first few novels made changes to the content (possibly more substantial than just retitling and renaming the character). Is this the case with Casino Royale, or did the 1955 American edition and later reprints otherwise mostly leave the content wholly untouched? Schissel | Sound the Note! 15:21, 31 July 2019 (UTC)

Historical existence of "passer à la mandolin"
The article claims that "passer à la mandolin" was a "French-Moroccan torture technique", but a Google search for "passer à la mandolin" returns only 260 results, basically all referencing Casino Royale. The only reference in this article is a book about James Bond (as opposed to, say, French-Maroccan history). Has anyone read the actual source? If it only contains an unferenced claim, this sounds like something Fleming might have made up (or based on unfactual stories he heard). Ornilnas (talk) 04:41, 1 April 2021 (UTC)


 * This has not been addressed, and I think that the safest course is to delete the reference. Happy to re-instate if evidence turns up. Cooke (talk) 17:01, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Yes, I have read the source and that is what is says. - 2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:6562:A1FC:F7F2:51BF (talk) 19:30, 14 December 2022 (UTC)
 * I've taken it out again - there's no reference in the book and you're right on the lack of information. I don't think it would be found in books on French-Moroccan history, as looks like it was a wartime practice. Even so, I would have thought there would be at least a couple of refs to it independent of the novel. It is possible it was something he made up (it is fiction after all), but it's also possible he was told a true story by someone who made up the term. Either way, I think it's best left out for now. 2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:6562:A1FC:F7F2:51BF (talk) 19:58, 14 December 2022 (UTC)