Talk:Castle Hill (Ipswich, Massachusetts)

Tone
On 10 September 2006, Elonka indicated that the tone of this article was not appropriate for an encyclopedia. Aside from a very few phrases like "she called his cards", most of it seems to me to be very well written. I would request that anyone who questions tone, be specific, here on the talk page, as to the changes that are needed, as is suggested by the tone template. Bejnar 19:08, 27 September 2006 (UTC)


 * Ideed. What, specifically, "is not written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article" in this piece at present?

History
Lack of citations in the history section about Castle Hill. Some of the information seems suspect. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 144.121.23.26 (talk) 19:32, 14 September 2019 (UTC)