Talk:Cat Daddy/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 21:22, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox

 * No issues

Lead

 * "Cat Daddy" is a 2010 song by American Hip hop group The Rej3ctz and an eponymous dance. → "and an eponymous dance" does not make any sense
 * It is a dance by the same name. Should it by homonymous?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 23:14, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * If you are going to mention it as a dance, I would change it to "Cat Daddy" is a 2010 song by American Hip hop group The Rej3ctz. It is based off a dance of the same name and is from the 2010 mixtape... Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:08, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * done--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:24, 1 July 2012 (UTC)


 * ...including fourteen weeks on the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs... → Change to "including the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, where it spent fourteen weeks and eventually peaked at number 77"
 * O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:35, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
 * The dance is the one that Chris Brown performed during 106 & Park 10th Anniversary special in October 2010. → What is "the dance"?
 * The Cat Daddy is the name of a dance.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:56, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I would change the prose of the sentence, so that it makes more sense. For instance, Chris Brown performed the dance during the 106 & Park 10th Aniversary special in October 2010. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:08, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:30, 1 July 2012 (UTC)


 * ...which has over 70 million YouTube views. → Find a source to verify this as of a certain date
 * This is sourced in the main body directly to YouTube, which is an acceptable source for YouTube views.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:59, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I actually wanted you to put the latest date where the video had 70 million views. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:08, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:38, 1 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Several notable celebrities have been filmed doing the dance. → Such as?
 * Below we have videos with Bieber and Upton. The subsequent paragraph details Upton, however, we don't have WP:RS that talk substantively about other performers.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:53, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I just wanted you to mention at least two examples of celebrities in the lead section. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:08, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Done--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:41, 1 July 2012 (UTC)


 * ...posted a video of her bikini-clad rendition of the dance on YouTube and YouTube temporarily banned the video. → Change "and YouTube temporarily banned the video" to ",causing YouTube to temporarily ban the video."
 * Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:59, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Her video has over 6 million YouTube views. → Find a source to verify this as of a certain date
 * As stated above YouTube is a WP:RS for number of YouTube views.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:54, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
 * My apologies with this; I wanted you to put as of what month and year that this video had six million views. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:08, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:55, 1 July 2012 (UTC)

Original version

 * Then, the Rej3ctz released a video of the song, featuring Brown dancing, that was made at Venice Beach in the summer of 2010. → Verifiable?
 * This issue needs to be addressed before I pass this article. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:08, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Had to use YouTube in this instance.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:04, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Noted. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 19:45, 1 July 2012 (UTC)


 * By April 20, 2011, the official video had 21 million pageviews.[1] → Not necessary because of earlier date mentioned later
 * What do you mean?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:04, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I misinterpreted this, so this issue has been addressed. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:08, 1 July 2012 (UTC)


 * As of 7 May 2012 the original December 2, 2010 upload of the official video has over 66 million YouTube views,[8] → Fix date formatting to be consistent with rest of article
 * This issue needs to be addressed before I pass this article. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:08, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:05, 1 July 2012 (UTC)


 * ...while an alternate March 9, 2011 upload of the video has an additional 4 million plus views.[9] → Only include official information
 * This issue needs to be addressed before I pass this article. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:08, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * These are identical official videos uploaded to alternate file hosts.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:07, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Noted. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 19:45, 1 July 2012 (UTC)


 * The song was rereleased on June 27, 2011.[10] → Fix spelling of "rereleased" to "re-released"
 * Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:08, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Cover versions

 * ...when she served as Grand Marshall for the February 26, 2012 Daytona 500.[15] → "February 26" not necessary
 * It provides context in ralation to April 30.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:36, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Since there is only one Daytona 500 per year, it is not necessary in this instance. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 18:08, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * How many readers will remember the date of the 2012 Daytona 500 forever? We want to be clear that this occurred a few months before the Cat Daddy phenomenon.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:57, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I would agree to this if it was not wiki-linked. Since it is wiki-linked, readers can access information such as the date it occurred. Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 19:45, 1 July 2012 (UTC)


 * ...was posted online on Monday April 30.[16] → "Monday" not necessary; include year
 * O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:38, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
 * According to the Los Angeles Times the video was removed on May 1, while the Daily News reported its removal was May 2.[12][16] → Include year
 * O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:51, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Following Upton's rendition, The Rej3ctz were impressed enough with Upton that they attempted to contact her regarding future collaboration(s).[3] YouTube now hosts videos of numerous celebrities doing the Cat Daddy including Selena Gomez and Justin Bieber.[20] → Expand this subsection
 * Expanded.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:19, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Tracklisting

 * Change title of section to "Track listing"
 * Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:38, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Chart performance

 * No issues

Release history

 * No issues