Talk:Catamenial pneumothorax

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 October 2021 and 20 November 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Olivetabasco. Peer reviewers: Teyofi.

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Peer Review
Hello, fellow Wikipedians. I am a 4th-year medical student and I am performing a peer evaluation on another 4th-year medical student's edits to this page.

Lead
You made significant contributions to the lead, expanding it. The part defining catamenial pneumothorax ("Catamenial pneumothorax is defined as at least two episodes...) is very helpful however I think it may be a but over detailed when you get into the definition of endometriosis- I suggest linking to the relevant pages if possible.

Context
Briefly mentioned before, but linking to other pages on Wikipedia may be helpful for the reader trying to gain more insight into the other terminology used in the article.

Tone and Balance
Your writing remains neutral and unbiased.

Sources and References
There are some lapses where citations can be added. If you are using the same citation, then just cite it. Your articles on review seem to come from peer-reviewed journals, which is great.

Overall Impressions
Your article is coming along nicely. I would suggest expanding your medical info box on the right of the page with some subheaders such as "symptoms," "risk factors," "diagnostic methods," "differential diagnosis," and "treatment."

Teyofi (talk) 17:12, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

Hello, thank you for your suggested edits. I agree with your feedback and have made the edits suggested and feel that they have improved the article. Thank you for taking the time to evaluate my work!

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This paper https://doi.org/10.1007/s12109-020-09750-0 (full paper with paywall https://link.springer.com/epdf/10.1007/s12109-020-09750-0?sharing_token=-Kdjc4Vwp59b3KZ6uHgDave4RwlQNchNByi7wbcMAY4zL2q_VjfJmW6twqPCXJPXlqW5_aE7qZ7HWX3KWOmI1rC75-j9MEV2tAZ8OTJF9lboVHukkDv5VdfLmO0zcnoLBg8bHnV0lkHKl54JJc8mrfhI3-WubEpLDKrsjp-W8dg%3D) mentioned plagiarism in this article, It was confirmed with this tool: https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Catamenial+pneumothorax&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 LaMèreVeille (talk) 14:32, 24 July 2020 (UTC)