Talk:Cathy Linh Che

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jada Jones. Peer reviewers: Kdd038.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 18:44, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review. Krystal Dabney
The article does provide a lot of information, but I feel it can be more organized. You should include the starting information that is speaking about her background, under a headline that could simply say: Early life or Early life and influences. This way the reader just won't see a big block of information, I also suggest having a directory panel, so the reader can click on what they want to learn and that can immediately take them to the information they want to know.

I also suggest of moving the first sentence of the first paragraph of information. And making it a small snippet instead, that way it can lead to the poet's biography, I also suggest uploading a picture of the poet to go along with the information you provided. This will give the reader a face to put the background information to, and know what the reader looks like. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kdd038 (talk • contribs) 01:05, 30 November 2017 (UTC)