Talk:Cattle/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 19:56, 25 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments
This article is a bit undercooked in some areas. Fear not—for I will assist you in correctly cooking this article to fulfill the needs of the hungry readers. Well, tomorrow that is. Wolverine XI  ( talk to me ) 19:56, 25 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 00:29, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Reading now. Expect a review in 40 minutes. Wolverine XI   ( talk to me ) 15:41, 26 March 2024 (UTC)

Review

 * Why link male and females? Everyone knows the distinction
 * Gone.


 * Needs more context
 * extended.


 * in => by
 * Edited.


 * Don't start two consecutive sentences with the same word
 * Fixed.


 * What does this have to do with its physical attributes?
 * Moved.


 * Nothing about horn, skin color, body measurements, exceptional individuals.
 * Added.


 * Unfamiliar mother?
 * Edited.


 * Don't like the sound of "less good"
 * Edited.


 * Any reason why evolution is in that position?
 * We have the biology first - characteristics, behavior, genetics, evolution; then we have the human-facing aspects from husbandry to culture.


 * in about?
 * Fixed.


 * is veal => as veal
 * Done.


 * Other animal parts => other body parts
 * Fixed.


 * it generally is => it is generally. Sounds better, IMO
 * Fixed.


 * is average => on average
 * Edited.


 * Date? This can easily expire.
 * Added.


 * For "in culture", what about literature and media portrayals?
 * Added.

Driveby comment

 * I think the Science Direct source should be replaced, based on this discussion. Esculenta (talk) 18:18, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Gone. Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:27, 26 March 2024 (UTC)