Talk:Caught in a Moment/GA1

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 14:21, 7 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Info box/Lead
 * Mayfair Strongroom Metropolis → Is this how it's written in the booklet? No 'Recordings Studios'?
 * Yeah Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * "Caught in a Moment" is a song by English girl group Sugababes, released as the fourth and final single from their third studio album Three (2003). → "Caught in a Moment" is a song recorded by English girl group Sugababesfor their third studio album Three (2003). It was released as the albums fourth and final single.
 * I don't really like this :/ Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Too much is going on too quick, just keep it simple. Say which album it is from first, then say it was released as a single. As a track is always a song first before it is a single. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   09:26, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Done Till  09:56, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * song is downtempo → song is a downtempo
 * Done Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * It is reminiscent of the group's ballads "Stronger" and "Too Lost in You", → Why? Could sound a bit bias.
 * Removed Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Upon release, the song became → Following its release, "Caught in a Moment" became
 * Done Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Background and release
 * During 2003, the Sugababes began working on their third studio album Three (2003), in which they wrote and recorded material while they travelled around the world and performed on tours such as the Liverpool Summer Pops. → This isn't working. During 2003 implies all of 2003, and you can't begin something for the duration of the year. Suggest changing to: In 2003, the Sugababes started to record songs for their third studio album, Three (2003). They wrote and recorded material in various countries around the world as they performed at various musical events such as the Liverpool Summer Pops.
 * Done Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * The album's fourth and final single, → As the album's fourth and final single,
 * Wrote something similar Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Composition and lyrics
 * produced in a similar vein to the → and its production is similar to the
 * Done Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * According to the digital sheet music published by Hal Leonard Publishing, → Useless info
 * I believe there is a requirement to cite these things Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * It's not, I've never included it since I was told not to include it. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   09:26, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Removed Till  09:56, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * It was compared to the works of girl groups All Saints and Massive Attack. → Massive Attack is also a girl group?
 * No, fixed Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * I made some changes to this section.


 * Chart performance
 * on 26 August 2004 issue → on the 26 August 2004 issue
 * Done Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Live performances
 * In regard to → With regard to
 * Done Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Credits and personnel
 * The personnel bit really needs to be two columns, it's far to long a list.
 * It used to be like this but was really ugly and bulky. I think it looks better as a long list Till  04:17, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * It looks uglier and bulkier as one really long list. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   09:26, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Not really. Till  09:56, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * It does, it would look a lot better if it were two columns. Articles which have credits with a fifth of this amount have two columns. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   16:00, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Done Till  11:48, 10 June 2013 (UTC)

On hold. — AARON  &bull; TALK   14:41, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Status
 * Fixed everything thanks. Till  11:48, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Passing.