Talk:Ceaușescu's final speech/Archive 1

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Lionster (talk) 16:14, 24 February 2017 (UTC)

Writing style and neutrality
This article needs to basically be completely re-written. I haven't checked, but it reads as if the text was just ripped from the source and it very clearly does not fit Wikipedia's writing style. It's written similarly to a newspaper article or a non-fiction book:

"his stunned expression remains one of the defining moments of the end of Communism in Eastern Europe"

"He did not realize, however, that a real revolution was starting right before his eyes."

Just two particularly obvious lines that are problematic. I don't really have the time or expertise on the subject to rework the article right now, but if anyone does, please look into it.

PatrioticProletarian (talk) 10:01, 13 September 2018 (UTC)