Talk:Cecilia Barriga

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Hi there! I had the chance to go over your article and I wanted to say that it is pretty well done. If possible, however, I recommend adding further content if possible. I do understand that it is sometimes hard to find additional info though. I noticed that in the education section you did not include where she originally studied, which is something I would consider adding. If she studied always studied at Columbia then I would consider rephrasing what you have so it's a little more clear. If she furthered her studies perhaps include where she originally attended if possible. Also, I felt there were to many "and"s in opening sentence. I would suggest making use of commas in that case to remove a few repeated words if that works, or rephrase. You also have a good amount of references so keep up with those. That way nothing you've done will get taken down. Very interesting filmmaker though. I think you have lots of great content to work with. Good luck with everything! — Preceding unsigned comment added by HeneryDave31 (talk • contribs) 04:13, 10 October 2015 (UTC)

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