Talk:Cecylia Arzewski

Hello I've been working on this page to address the constructive criticism "This biographical article is written like a resume. Please help improve it by revising it to be neutral and encyclopedic" received this month. I have reduced the promotional tone of the piece. I have added personal life details that would be ideally included in a encyclopedic biographical piece and not on a resume or promotional piece. I have changed the format additionally so that it feels less like a rattling off of a accomplishments and more digestible to the reader. If there are no more recommendations for improvement, I intend of removing the banner on this article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Annafarrell 2 (talk • contribs) 02:21, 20 February 2020 (UTC)