Talk:Cedric Wright/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: BrandonWu (talk · contribs) 13:37, 9 June 2014 (UTC)

Hello! I'm BrandonWu and I will review this fantastic article. I will try to work with this article during a 7 day time frame! Cheers!

Review
#:Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * See below for a prose review!
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Great lead, layout, etc. Lead could be a bit longer though.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * See below for a source review as well!
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * Major aspects covered!
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * Pictures are good, when the future FAN occurs, you should add more images, but for GA the images are good.
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * Pictures are good, when the future FAN occurs, you should add more images, but for GA the images are good.
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass Great job on this article! Hope to see at FAN soon!  WooHoo!  •  Talk to BrandonWu!  12:07, 11 June 2014 (UTC)

See below for the prose and source review!  WooHoo!  • Talk to BrandonWu!  13:41, 9 June 2014 (UTC)

Prose Review
Lead
 * "He was a long -time participants in the annual wilderness High Trips sponsored by the Sierra Club."
 * Shouldn't it be ".....a long-time participant....?
 * I corrected that typographical error. Cullen 328  Let's discuss it  03:46, 11 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Family and Violinist Sections
 * No errors.

Friendship and collaboration with Ansel Adams
 * No errors!

Home
 * No errors...:P

All other sections
 * Fantastic job on prose! No errors!

You did a great job on the prose. Usually, I find over 10-20 spelling/grammar mistakes. Great job Cullen! Source review will be done shortly.  WooHoo!  • Talk to BrandonWu!  13:48, 9 June 2014 (UTC)

Source Review
After spotchecking refs 1,3,5,7,etc., I've concluded that refs are perfect! All refs are reliable and they cover all the information that you cited.  WooHoo!  • Talk to BrandonWu!  13:49, 9 June 2014 (UTC)