Talk:Central All-Indonesian Workers Organization/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 01:18, 18 May 2012 (UTC)


 * I do enjoy reviewing Indonesia articles. I'll do this. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:18, 18 May 2012 (UTC)

General

 * The lede certainly needs to be expanded to provide a very brief history of the organisation.

1a

 * I see several one sentence paragraphs — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:22, 18 May 2012 (UTC)
 * I see very little point in checking the prose when the lede needs expansion. Please see to that first. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:41, 18 May 2012 (UTC)

2a

 * I'm seeing a huge whitespace in the references because of the box.

2b

 * What makes marxist.org a reliable source?

6a

 * File:SOBSI-congress-Malang-1947.jpg needs proof of publication. Note that it is PD 50 years after publication (25 if published before 1971), not the date of realisation.
 * File:Sobsi-rally.jpg - Same as above.
 * File:Pidato-blokzijl-speaking-at-1947-sobsi-meeting.jpg - Same as above.


 * Failing article, issues unaddressed after nearly 10 days. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:53, 26 May 2012 (UTC)