Talk:Central Park Tower/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * Add alt text to every image being used.
 * Remove the comma after "900 residential units".
 * Add a hyphen between "one third".
 * Add an "a" before "single window".
 * Remove the comma after "on the third floor".
 * "A reinforced concrete" - is the "a" necessary?
 * "superstructure is used" "superstructure ars used"
 * "rise the height" - typo for "raise"?
 * "Extell announced it were" "Extell announced it was"
 * "in order to" "to" (less wordy)
 * "which would" "that would"
 * Wikilink Michael Kimmelman, Robin Pogrebin, and Azi Paybarah.

Progress

 * Thanks. I have done all of these now. Regarding rise - I meant that the stairs extend the tower's full height, so I reworded it. Epicgenius (talk) 05:24, 9 July 2021 (UTC)