Talk:Cerebrospinal fluid/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kostas20142 (talk · contribs) 14:00, 17 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Looks very good at first glance, I will gladly provide a review --Kostas20142 (talk) 14:00, 17 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review,, I will address your concerns within the next few days :). --Tom (LT) (talk) 10:43, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ --Tom (LT) (talk) 10:38, 20 September 2017 (UTC)

comments

 * I see that a "citation needed" template is still pending. Could you please find a source to fix this??
 * ✅ --Tom (LT) (talk) 10:38, 20 September 2017 (UTC)

other modifications

 * "CSF has also been seen to drain into lymphatic vessels,[16] particularly those surrounding the nose via drainage along the olfactory nerve through the cribriform plate; however the pathway and extent are currently not known,[1] but may involve CSF flow along some cranial nerves and be more prominent in the neonate." → "CSF has also been seen to drain into lymphatic vessels,[16] particularly those surrounding the nose via drainage along the olfactory nerve through the cribriform plate. The pathway and extent are currently not known,[1] but may involve CSF flow along some cranial nerves and be more prominent in the neonate." I believe that this syntax would be better.
 * ✅ good point. --Tom (LT) (talk) 10:38, 20 September 2017 (UTC)