Talk:Cerro Blanco (volcano)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:33, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Would like to help with this as well when we are at it. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 18:33, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Sure, . Take note that I didn't pass this article through GOCE so verbiage will probably need some scrutiny here.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 18:55, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Alright, so here are my comments: Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 06:05, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Lead
 * Known as "Robledo" in which language?
 *  it is a caldera located  Omit "a caldera", it is redundant.
 * in a depression Calderas are depressions, so this should be redundant. Also, an explanation of caldera in a few words would be really helpful.
 * less well defined caldera to the south and with several lava domes. "well-defined", remove "with"
 * Every para should not start with the volcano name, variety is appreciated. Try something like "The caldera" at times.
 * up to one metre and are separated by distances up to thirty metres convert templates
 * Unlike dunes they do not Comma before "they"
 * have been compared to Martian ripple marks By whom?


 * Regional setting
 * where since the Eocene volcanic activity occurs –> where volcanic activity dates to the Eocene
 *  north of 25°; south of 25° "southern latitude"
 * a rising of the arc "a rise in the arc"
 * What are pyroclastic and subduction geometry?
 * Local setting
 * Several duplicate links from now on, use this tool to fix them User: Ucucha/duplinks
 * Nevado Tres Cruces lies in the west and Nevado Ojos del Salado lies southwest to the west, to the southwest.


 * In Pre-Holocene is it rosa white or white rosa?

Got most of these things; for the Martian ripple marks, would it be OK to mention" geologists" since the papers are written by them? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 16:37, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Yes. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 16:49, 6 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Got these other things as well.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 17:39, 6 May 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, glad to promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:05, 6 May 2016 (UTC)