Talk:Challenger Center for Space Science Education

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I feel that the subject of the article is appropriate for Wikipedia, but the present article needs a complete rewrite to avoid getting a deletion nomination, It appears to be in many sections copied from, which would be a copyright violation. It needs to gain a neutral point of view and to avoid sounding like an advertisement. I remove some obvious conflict of interest markers such as when it said "Our vision" etc. Text such as "the seven brave astronauts who are now in that shuttle on the way to being embedded into the heavens,and not forgotten in our hearts, especially when we look up into the night sky," might work in a funeral oration but are completely inappropriate in an encyclopedia, so I cleaned it up. The subject of the article seems a fine one, but the article is way too spammy and would benefit from a complete rewrite into an objective article, by someone who is a more talented writer than I am. If those working on the article have any references from independent sources, those are badly needed. To satisfy Wikipedia's notability standard, there needs to be coverage in multiple independent and reliable sources. The various external links are to websites which are not independent. Newspaper and magazine articles would help, especially if they are more than reprinted press releases (such as routine "Janie Jones from Thisville attended the Challenger Center"). For references to use, see Google News Archive. Many of the articles require a subscription to view the full text, but many libraries allow online access. Some of the articles, such as from the New York Times, ,  CNN  , and the San Francisco Chronicle  are viewable online. Behind paywall are many other articles in the LA Times, Washington Post, Boston Globe, etc. Edison (talk) 13:31, 23 May 2008 (UTC)

Copyright problem removed
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Edit request
Please change the intro "Challenger Center for Space Science Education is a United States 501(c)(3) non-profit organization headquartered in Washington, DC. It was founded in 1986 by the families of the astronauts who died in the Space Shuttle Challenger disaster on January 28, 1986. The organization offers dynamic, hands-on exploration and discovery opportunities to students around the world. These programs equip students with the knowledge, confidence, and skills that will help better our national social and economic well-being. Challenger Learning Centers give students the chance to become astronauts and engineers and solve real-world problems as they share the thrill of discovery on missions through the Solar System. Using space simulation and role-playing strategies, students bring their classroom studies to life and cultivate the skills needed for future success"

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"Challenger Center is a United States 501(c)(3) non-profit organization headquartered in Washington D.C. The organization was founded in 1986 in the aftermath of the Space Shuttle Challenger disaster. The Crew’s family came together firmly committed to the belief that they must carry on the spirit of their loved ones by continuing the Challenger crew’s educational mission. Their efforts resulted in the creation of Challenger Center and its global network of Challenger Learning Centers. The organization uses space-theme simulated learning and role-playing strategies to help students bring their classroom studies to life while cultivating skills and knowledge in science, technology, engineering, and mathematics (STEM) Challenger Center takes students on a mission with their cutting-edge Mission Control room and high-tech Space Station. Each student plays a unique role on a team, works with hands-on labs, and finds solutions to address a simulated emergency. Missions are aligned with the current national standards and are accompanied by classroom lessons." Source: https://www.challenger.org

Please update the Challenger Learning Centers name "Challenger Learning Center at the Museum of Flight	Seattle, Washington	Challenger Learning Center at Wheeling Jesuit University	Wheeling, West Virginia	Challenger Learning Center of Alaska	Kenai, Alaska	Challenger Space Center of Arizona	Peoria, Arizona	Challenger Learning Center at the Columbia Memorial Space Center	Downey, California	Challenger Learning Center at Chabot Space and Science Center	Oakland, California	Challenger Learning Center at the Discovery Museum Science & Space Center	Sacramento, California	Challenger Learning Center of Colorado at the Colorado Consortium for Earth & Space Science Education	Colorado Springs, Colorado	Challenger Learning Center at the Discovery Museum	Bridgeport, Connecticut	Challenger Learning Center at Kirby Smith Middle School	Jacksonville, Florida	Challenger Learning Center of Tallahassee	Tallahassee, Florida	Challenger Learning Center at the Coca-Cola Space Science Center	Columbus, Georgia Challenger Center Hawaii at Barbers Point Elementary School	Kapolei, Hawaii Challenger Learning Center at Heartland Community College	Normal, Illinois Challenger Learning Center for Science & Technology	Woodstock, Illinois Challenger Learning Center of Northwest Indiana	Hammond, Indiana Challenger Learning Center of Kentucky	Hazard, Kentucky Challenger Learning Center - Louisville, Academy @ Shawnee	Louisville, Kentucky Challenger Learning Center at Paducah, West Kentucky Community and Technical College	Paducah, Kentucky Challenge Learning Center of Maine	Bangor, Maine Challenger Learning Center at Howard B. Owens Science Center	Lanham, Maryland Challenger Learning Center at the Christa Corrigan McAuliffe Center, Framingham State University	Framingham, Massachusetts Challenger Learning Center in Memory of Alvin H. and Emily T. Little	Kalamazoo, Michigan Challenger Learning Center – St. Louis	St. Louis, Missouri Challenger Learning Center of Northern Nevada	Sparks, Nevada Buehler Challenger & Science Center	Paramus, New Jersey Town of Ramapo Challenger Learning Center	Airmont, New York Challenger Learning Center of the Twin Tier Region	Allegany, New York New York City Center for Space Science Education	New York City, New York Challenger Learning Center of Greater Rochester	Rochester, New York Challenger Learning Center of the Greater Capital Region at miSci	Schenectady, NY Challenger Learning Center of Dayton	Dayton, Ohio Challenger Learning Center of Lake Erie West	Oregon, Ohio Challenger Learning Center of Richland County School District One	Columbia, South Carolina Challenger STEM Learning Center; University of Tennessee Chattanooga	Chattanooga, Tennessee Texas State Technical College Challenger Learning Center	Harlingen, Texas Challenger Learning Center at the George Observatory	Needville, Texas Challenger Learning Center at the Scobee Education Center, San Antonio College	San Antonio, Texas Challenger Learning Center Richmond at the MathScience Innovation Center	Richmond, Virginia Challenger Learning Center of Las Cruces	Las Cruces, New Mexico"

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"Challenger Learning Center of Alaska 	Kenai, Alaska Challenger Space Center of Arizona 	Peoria, Arizona Challenger Learning Center at the Columbia Memorial Space Center 	Downey, California Challenger Learning Center at Chabot Space and Science Center 	Oakland, California Challenger Learning Center at the Powerhouse Science Center Discovery Campus 	Sacramento, California Challenger Learning Center of Colorado 	Colorado Springs, Colorado Challenger Learning Center at the Discovery Museum 	Bridgeport, Connecticut Challenger Learning Center at the Kirby Smith Middle School 	Jackson, Florida Challenger Learning Center of Tallahassee 	Tallahassee, Florida Challenger Learning Center at the Coca-Cola Space Science Center 	Columbus, Georgia Challenger Center Hawaii at Barbers Point Elementary School 	Kapolei, Hawaii Challenger Learning Center at Heartland Community College 	Normal, Illinois Challenger Learning Center for Science & Technology of Aurora University 	Woodstock, Illinois Challenger Learning Center of Northwest Indiana 	Hammond, Indiana Challenger Learning Center of Kentucky 	Hazard, Kentucky Challenger Learning Center – Louisville 	Louisville, Kentucky Challenger Learning Center at Paducah 	Paducah, Kentucky Challenger Learning Center of Maine 	Bangor, Maine Challenger Learning Center at Howard B. Owens Science Center 	Lanham, Maryland Challenger Learning Center at the Christa Corrigan McAuliffe Center, Framingham State University 	Framingham, Massachusetts Challenger Learning Center – St. Louis	St. Louis, Missouri Challenger Learning Center of Northern Nevada	Sparks, Nevada Buehler Challenger & Science Center	Paramus, New Jersey Challenger Learning Center of Las Cruces	Las Cruces, New Mexico Town of Ramapo Challenger Learning Center	Airmont, New York Challenger Learning Center of the Twin Tier Region	Allegany, New York Challenger Learning Center of Lockport	Lockport, New York NYC Center for Aerospace and Applied Mathematics 	New York City, New York Challenger Learning Center of Greater Rochester	Rochester, New York Challenger Learning Center of the Greater Capital Region at miSci	Schenectady, New York Challenger Learning Center of Dayton	Dayton, Ohio Challenger Learning Center of Lake Erie West	Oregon, Ohio Challenger Learning Center of Richland County School District One	Columbia, South Carolina Challenger STEM Learning Center; University of Tennessee Chattanooga 	Chattanooga, Tennessee Challenger Learning Center at Texas State Technical College Harlingen	Harlingen, Texas Challenger Learning Center at the Scobee Education Center, San Antonio College	San Antonio, Texas Challenger Learning Center at Texas State Technical College Waco 	Waco, Texas Challenger Learning Center Richmond at the Math-Science Innovation Center	Richmond, Virginia Challenger Learning Center at Wheeling Jesuit University	Wheeling, West Virginia" source: https://www.challenger.org/where-we-are

Please update the Advisor Council "President George H.W. Bush Senator and astronaut John Glenn" to "George H.W. Bush, John Glenn and Annie Glenn, Norman R. Augustine, Sarah Brightman" source: https://www.challenger.org/who-we-are/#team

Please update the Board of Directors "Charles Resnik MD - Brother of Judith Resnik" to " •June Scobee Rodgers •Virginia A. Barnes •Kent Rominger •Capt. Kenneth S. Reightler •Dan Renberg •Robert Curbeam •Lance Bush, Ph.D. •Kevin J. Anderson •Warren M. Boley Jr. •Dr. Richard Garriott de Cayeux •Leslee Gilbert •Gwen Griffin •Lowell Grissom •W. Michael Hawes, D. Sc. •Laura Husband •Josh Izenberg •Capt. Mark E Kelly •Kathie Klein •Barbara Morgan •John Shannon •Jackie A. Shia •Christopher Stott •Carol Vorderman MB •Karolyn D. Young" Source: https://www.challenger.org/who-we-are/#team

Please update references "https://www.challenger.org/where-we-are/" to "Challenger.org"

Sfernandez86 (talk) 17:47, 20 September 2017 (UTC)
 * This request has been moved from the user's Talk page. Requests are supposed to go to the article in question and this seemed like the best guess. jd22292 (Jalen D. Folf) (talk) 00:31, 22 September 2017 (UTC)
 * The introduction request cannot be accepted, as it does not comply with Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy (it's clearly promotional). Things such as "firmly committed to the belief that they must carry on the spirit of their loved ones by continuing the Challenger crew’s educational mission", "cultivating skills and knowledge" and "cutting-edge Mission Control room and high-tech Space Station" may be appropriate to put onto something like the organization's website, but are completely unsuitable for an encyclopedia. Remember, Wikipedia is not a place for advertisement.
 * The list request should only include the actual centers that you're proposing to add/remove (as well as references to prove their existence), not the full list. Now, board of directors shouldn't really be present in the article, should it? Perhaps the section should be removed altogether? Else the article just turns into lists... And, I just realized that the proposed addition at the start is partially copied over from the organization's website, which is a clear copyright violation unless the text is in public domain/ has been released under the Creative Commons Licence. Overall, the edit request can't be implemented. Regards, VB00 (talk) 18:01, 27 September 2017 (UTC)