Talk:Chamber of Commerce Building (Manhattan)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:56, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:56, 28 May 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * "a NRHP" "an NRHP" (acronym; both uses)
 * Done.
 * Remove the comma after "included in the colonnade".
 * Done.
 * "second bay from right" "second bay from the right"
 * Done.
 * Add a serial comma after "committee rooms" in #Interior.
 * Done.
 * "moved out during 1979" "moved out in 1979"
 * Done, though I did it slightly differently to avoid putting "out in" right next to each other. Epicgenius (talk) 19:04, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "U.S. president Grover Cleveland" "U.S. President Grover Cleveland" (title)
 * Done.
 * "became an entirely volunteer organization" "became an entire volunteer organization" or "became a volunteer organization entirely"
 * I reworded it slightly differently. Epicgenius (talk) 19:04, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Mark sources from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Done, with subscription content marked accordingly. Epicgenius (talk) 19:04, 1 June 2021 (UTC)

Progress

 * Thanks for the review. I have addressed all of the issues above. Epicgenius (talk) 19:04, 1 June 2021 (UTC)