Talk:Champagne Problems (album)/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:55, 13 June 2022 (UTC)

Here comes a review for you in the GAN backlog! --K. Peake 10:55, 13 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Under the released and length parameters, shouldn't Champagne Problems not be before each part since we already know what these are?


 * Why is dance-pop not listed as the genre in the infobox?


 * The creation sentence should be the third of the first para instead, as this info should be before the final product's music
 * I wasn't sure what you were asking here so I did some c/e hoping that helps resolve this issue.


 * "Champagne Problems was created over" → "The album was created over" and shouldn't you mention this was during late 2021?


 * Remove the part about Heartbreaker having used the same format previously because this is the lead, not background


 * "from Champagne Problems #DQH1 and Champagne Problems #DQH2" → "from both #DQH1 and #DQH2" since you already wrote Champagne Problems #DQH1 earlier in this para


 * Remove wikilink on YouTube

Background and creation

 * Remove the comma before Heartbreaker


 * "on which it was issued for" → "which was released as planned for"
 * I did some c/e.

Composition and reception

 * "of 24UR, and is entirely performed in English unlike her" → "of 24UR and is entirely performed in English, unlike Inna's"


 * Wikilink refrain


 * "Musially, "Champagne Problems" is" → "Musically, "Champagne Problems" is"


 * Specify which series of Dance Queen's House the challenge was presented during


 * Are you sure the second OCC source can be used to verify it as her first entry since Hot because the history does not include download charts?
 * I am not sure, but according to Inna discography, it looks like Hot was the first and last entry in a UK album music chart before this recording. This fact would be something Billboard would indicate, but I know that overseas music charts do not go in-depth or provide analysis for feats such as this one. Let me know what you would like me to do about this.


 * Pipe GfK Entertainment to GfK Entertainment charts


 * The source does not call the album the singer's first charting record in Germany

Track listing

 * You should add the respective sources to these parts to verify the track listings

Charts

 * Pipe Official German Charts to GfK Entertainment Charts

Release history

 * Format → Format(s)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this is a well-written article for sure however! --K. Peake 11:30, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I wouldn't mind jumping in to help address these issues. Not sure if Darius is dealing with RL issues, but if it's ok with the reviewer, I'll see what I can do. Best – jona  ✉ 13:25, 30 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I am more than happy with that, being that not only has it been more than two weeks but there is not too many issues anyway. --K. Peake 16:29, 30 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I have addressed the issues as well as did some c/e throughout the article. Best – jona  ✉ 14:02, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot for jumping in, but I would say the genres sentence about the first release should be the last of the first para instead and just remove the first release to chart part altogether, really. --K. Peake 11:25, 3 July 2022 (UTC)
 * I have addressed the issues. Best – jona  ✉ 13:27, 3 July 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, nice job as a replacement editor! --K. Peake 09:00, 4 July 2022 (UTC)