Talk:Chamuel (wrestler)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

Will review this article. MWright96 (talk) 07:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "and occasional tag team partner Henry" - and with occassional
 * "in the vein" - style

Professional wrestling career

 * "Chamuel made his professional wrestling début in 2010, as the tag team partner of regular-sized wrestler Henry. The two portrayed a masked, monster/doll duo with Chamuel initially wearing a mask that resembled a ventriloquist's dummy but would later change to an evil clown mask." - these two sentences need to be verified by a reliable source(s) since CageMatch does not mention any of this
 * "initially wearing a mask that resembled a" - a mask resembling a
 * "On February 21 he defeats" - beat
 * "Chamuel capped off 2012" - more formal; ended

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2017–present)

 * "in an attempt to fool the referee" - deceive
 * "The feud between the two led to a Lucha de Apuestas, mask vs. mask match, between the two" - repetition of the same phrase in the same sentence
 * "The feud between the two led to a Lucha de Apuestas, mask vs. mask match, between the two as part of the CMLL 86th Anniversary Show." - This sentence is duplicated and only one should exist

Independent circuit (2017–present)

 * "While working for CMLL, Chamuel, like all CMLL workers, is allowed to take independent circuit bookings on days he is not needed by CMLL." - excess repetition of CMLL in the same sentence
 * "While working for CMLL, Chamuel, like all CMLL workers," - repetition of working/workers
 * "Microman's independent circuit appearances usually see him team with and face off against other CMLL Micro-Estrellas." - think you mean Chamuel's?

Reception

 * "and a Cage Side Seats review named the match the "match of the night"" - repetition of the word "match"