Talk:Chandler Stephenson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 23:19, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

I'll be taking a look at this! —  Ghost River  23:19, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lede

 * Mention in first sentence that he previously played for the Caps ✅
 * Per MOS:SEAOFBLUE, any "city, state" or "city, province" should be one link (to the city) and not two split; this applies to Saskatoon in both the infobox and lede ✅
 * and in the midget hockey looks like a couple words are missing ✅
 * Don't need to include WHL in parentheses if it's only used once ✅
 * Overall could be expanded: my unofficial system is one paragraph for childhood & juniors (or college), one for professional ✅

Early life

 * Comma after "hockey playing family" ✅
 * Spell out "National Hockey League" with the acronym in parentheses after the first instance ✅
 * Name for the brother? ✅
 * Link concussion ✅

Amateur

 * "and in the midget hockey" looks like you forgot a few words there, huh? ✅
 * he was signed with either "was signed by" or "signed with" works ✅
 * Turns out we actually have a link for WHL Bantam Draft ✅
 * The WHL acronym should be introduced at some point ✅
 * During the offseason prior to his rookie season A little dense ✅
 * What was his main focus with the personal trainer, etc., if it was mentioned?
 * Comma after "at the World U-17 Hockey Challenge" ✅
 * Link the first instances of "goals" and "assists" ✅
 * "Due to this, he was scratched for the Pats' first five games following the tournament." "The injury also caused him to miss his first five WHL games after the tournament ended" ✅
 * Link the first instance of "points" ✅
 * There should be an apostrophe in "previous seasons", either "season's" or "seasons'" depending on whether you're describing one or all of them
 * Spell out and link first instance of CHL (not in Top Prospects Game, in "amongst CHL players") ✅

Washington Capitals

 * Comma after "the Hershey Bears" ✅
 * "on an amateur try-out and made his professional debut at for the tail end" to reduce repetition with "He made his AHL debut" in the next sentence ✅
 * "to participate in the Capitals' 2014 rookie camp" ✅
 * "after registering one assist" in how many AHL games?
 * Comma after "In his first two games with the Capitals"
 * "Upon joining the Bears" "Upon rejoining the Bears" ✅
 * I think I was at the game that broke his drought...
 * Good Luck Charm circa 2018? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 05:27, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Capitals' bottom-six forwards line I mean, technically those are two lines
 * an average of 87:20 on the penalty kill An average of 87 minutes per game?!
 * , per the article: Stephenson logged 87:20 of shorthanded time on ice this season Was 3 on 3 OT introduced at this time? because it could also be that....it could also just be a typo 05:27, 30 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Comma after "in the conference finals" ✅
 * Comma after "Humboldt, Saskatchewan" per MOS:GEOCOMMA ✅
 * "in 64 games during the season." (Then delink in the next sentence) ✅
 * "played alongside new teammates often" "often played alongside new teammates" ✅
 * "attributed his decline in production due to his mental health" ✅
 * Possessive for "six of the Capitals' seven" ✅

Golden Knights

 * This section should be titled Vegas Golden Knights to parallel Washington Capitals ✅
 * Lowercase and link general manager ✅
 * "15-5" "15–5" ✅
 * "linemates as they suffered from injuries" "linemates, who had both been injured early in the season" (checked against source) ✅

Awards and honours

 * Specify "Stanley Cup champion" ✅

General comments

 * Pictures look good
 * No stability concerns in the revision history
 * Earwig score looks good, top result is a mirror site

FINALLY putting this one on hold. As always, ping me if you have any questions, and let me know when you're finished. Thank you for your patience. —  Ghost River  15:58, 28 December 2021 (UTC)
 * , done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 19:12, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
 * All looks good now, happy to pass! —  Ghost River  19:23, 3 January 2022 (UTC)