Talk:Chandra Khonnokyoong/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 11:26, 5 February 2018 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 11:26, 5 February 2018 (UTC)

General

 * Not an issue for GA, but is there any reason why you chose "mae ji" as the transliteration here, unlike the other two articles I've reviewed?
 * No reason. Someone else started the article, that's why. Fixed per Talk:Maechi.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 00:10, 6 February 2018 (UTC)

Early life

 * She had no formal education, as this was uncommon for Thai women in those days: suggest "Like most Thai women in those days she had no formal education".
 * Done.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 00:10, 6 February 2018 (UTC)

Setting up a new meditation centre

 * There are a couple of uncited sentences in the "Setting up a new meditation centre".
 * Fixed.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 00:10, 6 February 2018 (UTC)


 * Luang Por Dhammajayo and Mae Ji Chandra took responsibility for the finances of the establishment, and the lay-supporter, who later ordained as Luang Por Dattajivo, took responsibility for building on the site: saying "the" lay-supporter implies he's already been mentioned; should this be "a" lay-supporter, or does it refer to someone named above?
 * No, it doesn't. Fixed.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 00:10, 6 February 2018 (UTC)

That's everything; the article is in good shape. Mike Christie (talk – contribs – library) 12:04, 5 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 00:11, 6 February 2018 (UTC)

Passing. That was a bit quicker than the previous two! Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:33, 6 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much.--Farang Rak Tham (talk) 08:30, 6 February 2018 (UTC)