Talk:Changi Airport MRT station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments
 * Lead is a little brief. Apparently someone has removed a part of the lead into the history, which caused the repated point (The idea of linking...), so I moved it back to the lead.--ZKang123 (talk) 02:09, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Where is street address referenced?✅
 * Where is operated by SMRT referenced? ✅
 * Indeed, there seems to be no explanation as to what SMRT means?
 * SMRT means 'Singapore Mass Rapid Transit' corporation, though it isn't stated explicitly elsewhere especially on its website. It seems the actual meaning has dropped out over time.--ZKang123 (talk) 03:14, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Fair enough. I would just link it in the prose then. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 08:52, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ 1.02 editor (T/C) 09:38, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Anyway, is it necesary to add what it stands for? Possibly as a hatnote?-ZKang123 (talk) 08:47, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Anyway, is it necesary to add what it stands for? Possibly as a hatnote?-ZKang123 (talk) 08:47, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

That's all I have on a rapid first pass. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 19:17, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "an East-West direction" no need to capitalise E/W.
 * " Initially, after the station was first opened," no need for  "initially".
 * "first opened" date?
 * Non-breaking space between time and am/pm.
 * "Sundays instead," no need for instead.
 * In both cases.
 * "from 7 – 9 mins" either "7 to 9 minutes" or "7–9 minutes".
 * What is TEL and when, roughly (or even exactly) is "the future"?✅
 * You relink East West line after linking it in the lead but not the airport? Be consistent.
 * " This has proven effective given the short 20 kilometre distance" This was effective... and convert 20km to miles.
 * "Public buses instead link commuters" link or linked?
 * " it has provided a new transport option for the airport, benefitting both Singaporeans and tourists." sounds like a tourist brochure.✅
 * " the Mass Rapid Transit system" MRT.✅
 * " East West line at Tanah Merah," both overilnked.✅
 * "The idea of extending the Mass Rapid Transit system to Changi Airport..." hang on, didn't you say that in the previous para?✅, moved to lead.--ZKang123 (talk) 02:09, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
 * You link Terminal 3 after Terminal 2, but you'd already mentioned Terminal 3 above without linking it there...
 * " which requires" which would require?
 * "closing monitoring is needed" was? Check the tenses here, it feels like a lot of it is written as if it's still ongoing.
 * "station have actually put " station has put
 * "By then, there are about..."? what?
 * "Land Transport Authority announced an extension of the Thomson–East Coast line" both overlinked.
 * "Thomson–East Coast line (TEL)" tell me what TEL means before you use it.
 * "Station details and design" avoid sandwiching text between images. And also they both spill over into the refs section which compresses the references into two columns rather than four.✅
 * "approximately 60m long by 20m wide by 36m high each" convert.✅
 * let me know when you've completed every point. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 08:15, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I think every point has been covered. You can do a check.--ZKang123 (talk) 08:47, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I have addressed your final point on SMRT 1.02 editor (T/C) 09:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

Fine, I'm content with the changes, made a few minor tweaks, so I'm now promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:26, 21 April 2020 (UTC)