Talk:Chaos;Head/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ProtoDrake (talk · contribs) 15:28, 20 July 2016 (UTC)

Be back with a review in three days. --ProtoDrake (talk) 15:28, 20 July 2016 (UTC)

Review

 * Minor query: Does Chaos;Child have any relation to Chaos;Head? If so, it should probably be mentioned in the lead alongside Chaos;Head Love Chu Chu!. Something like as well as the follow-up game Chaos;Head Love Chu Chu! and a [blank] Chaos;Child.
 * Yes, I missed this. Thanks


 * a process that took longer time but made it possible to compose - Do you mean "a longer time" or "more time"?
 * Fixed


 * The player chooses the delusions through the "delusional trigger" system, where a green and a red light are displayed on the top of the screen, representing positive and negative delusions, respectively.[2] - Too many commas in this sentence.
 * Changed it a little bit - let me know if it's fine now or if it needs to be rewritten


 * The PlayStation Vita version, which bundled Chaos;Head Noah with the follow-up Chaos;Head Love Chu Chu! under the title Chaos;Head Dual, included the Z-rated version, and was released on August 21, 2014. - Did you mean "included" or "including"?
 * Fixed


 * The final section "Other media": if Chaos;Child is related to Chaos;Head, adding that information and renaming the section "Legacy" would be good.
 * Fixed

That's honestly all I found, but they're still notable things to fix or explain. Don't think it's worth putting on hold for, so I'll just wait for your response. --ProtoDrake (talk) 13:52, 22 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I think I've fixed everything you brought up.--IDVtalk 20:29, 22 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Perfect! This is now a Pass. --ProtoDrake (talk) 21:37, 22 July 2016 (UTC)