Talk:Charles B. Gatewood

Edit request from, 27 October 2011
Minor grammatical suggestion - change the paragraph that begins

In May of 1881 he returned to Virginia on sick leave, he developed rheumatism from exposure to the elements in his two years working with the Apache scouts in the harsh Southwest.

to

In May of 1881 he returned to Virginia on sick leave as he had developed rheumatism from exposure to the elements in his two years working with the Apache scouts in the harsh Southwest.

Or break it into two separate sentences: "... sick leave.  He had developed ..."

144.51.3.126 (talk) 16:53, 27 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes check.svg Done by User:Mike Searson. — Bility (talk) 19:25, 27 October 2011 (UTC)