Talk:Charles Faroux/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name (talk · contribs) 16:50, 5 November 2022 (UTC)

I will gladly review this. The review should be ready shortly. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 16:50, 5 November 2022 (UTC)

I'm afraid there are too many serious errors for such a short article. I've compiled them and some more minor things as well.


 * Infobox should have more information added.
 * Just a note, infoboxes aren't even manditory, so I'd rather just delete it. Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:59, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
 * The citation in the lead shouldn't be necessary because the information can be found in the body.
 * Moved  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:10, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
 * His birthday is never mentioned in the article.
 * Cited  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:10, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Rename the career section to something like "Early life and career".
 * Done  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:10, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
 * He visited the United States and spent several months in Alaska. [...] He saw the end of the war as a technician for Hispano-Suiza, where he was responsible for the supply of aircraft engines. The citation for these lines does and everything between them does not verify them.
 * Earwig has found copyright issues with the carom billiards section, which seems to have been copied verbatim from here.
 * Considering this is a translation of our French article, it seems high likely this was copied from our article on Faroux. Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:59, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Faroux died in February 1957 in Neuilly-sur-Seine near Paris. The citation here is for an article before his stated death, so naturally it doesn't support this claim.
 * Good catch, it was in the wrong place, I've done a shuffle.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:10, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
 * The last section should probably be a table.
 * I disagree with this - they generally aren't in table form for won titles. Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:10, 5 November 2022 (UTC)

Unfortunately, I must fail this. My condolences. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 17:17, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi! Thanks for taking a look, I've left some comments for a later future nom. Hope you don't mind  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:10, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
 * My apologies if I was a little overly strict with the review. I hope your future nomination is successful. An anonymous username, not my real name (talk) 18:19, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Not at all, there's clearly a few things to work on. Thanks for the review.  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 18:23, 5 November 2022 (UTC)