Talk:Charles Mears/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:46, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * "produce lumber. Mears" link lumber first time.


 * " to ship his" transport.


 * "18 miles" convert.


 * "canals, canal locks, control" -> "canals, their locks, control"


 * "the Farmer's Map of Michigan, and" is this a notable map?
 * ✅ = expanded on this.


 * "lumber camp. The camp " shade repetitive.


 * "1861 depiction of.." avoid starting with a numeral.


 * "near Ludington) renamed" overlinked.


 * ISBNs ought to be formatted consistently.


 * This is in good condition, not too much to address. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:07, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for review. Will start working on this after breakfast.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:48, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
 * All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:37, 31 August 2021 (UTC)