Talk:Charlie Don't Surf (Veronica Mars)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 12:14, 13 August 2015 (UTC)

Review should be up soon. Good888 (talk) 12:14, 13 August 2015 (UTC)

Lead and infobox
 * Laura San Giacomo and Enrico Colantoni were linked twice.
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 * "since their show Just Shoot Me!." I am not too sure that . is needed.
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Synopsis
 * Optional, but try to add citations if possible. I know from the Manual of Style that it is not required but it helps!
 * Citations to what?
 * Perhaps ref 11?
 * I added one at the end of the section. Let me know if you want more. Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 19:43, 16 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Should rape be linked?
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 * Since this is Parker’s first mention, it should state her full name.
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 * "A woman asks Keith to investigate her husband, who may be having an affair." Should have meanwhile at the start of the sentence.
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 * Can fraternity party be linked?
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 * "and presents an evidence." An evidence?
 * oops.


 * "Keith and Harmony flirt." Erm expand on this?
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Arc significance
 * I am not too sure this section is needed. It already states this in the Synopsis.
 * Removed

Production
 * Matt Czuchry was already linked earlier.
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Reception
 * Compare the ratings to Wichita Linebacker.
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 * "Television Without Pity gave "Charlie Don't Surf" a "B+"." Can you expand this a bit?
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 * "Reviewer Alan Sepinwall was very positive towards the episode" I think the readers would already know Sepinwall is a reviewer considing this is the reviews section. Perhaps you could say: Alan Sepinwall was very positive towards the episode on his blog What's Alan Watching.
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References
 * Used Checklinks and found no problems. Yup it does say one is broken, but that was archived.
 * Ref 1 needs its publisher.
 * As far as I can see, all the refs have publishers. Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 19:43, 16 August 2015 (UTC)

Placing on hold for now. Good888 (talk) 11:33, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! I believe I have responded to all your concerns. Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 19:43, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
 * No problem. There WAS a reference that did not have its publisher, but I have added it now. Promoting to GA class. Good888 (talk) 19:54, 16 August 2015 (UTC)