Talk:Charlotte FC/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cherrell410 (talk · contribs) 13:18, 30 June 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Suggestions for improvement below:
 * Expansion bid under Tepper: remove redlink
 * Redlinks do not need to be removed if there's potential notability.
 * Inaugural season: says nothing about expansion draft
 * Added.
 * Inaugural season: Probably more info about 2022 offseason, and a new subsection for the 2023 season (or rename inaugural to something else
 * I would rather wait until the season is over before adding a full section.
 * Stadium: you don't need to mention that the panthers are owned by tepper, as the lead says just that
 * The lead must repeat information from the body, therefore it belongs here as well.
 * Headquarters and training facility: the campus, planned to popen in early 2023 - we're way past early 2023, needs updated info
 * There has been no recent coverage of the facility, so I've amended the sentence to 2023 and will keep an eye out for further news.
 * Ownership and management: remove redlink
 * Again, unnecessary.
 * Team records: add a year by year heading before the table (as seen in the article for the revolution)
 * Don't see the point in this.
 * Head coaches: As of October 26, 2022 --> as of 2022 season
 * That line is meant to signify that it was updated on a certain date, which could be mid-season if such a change is made.
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Suggestions for improvement below:
 * Expansion bid under Tepper: remove redlink
 * Redlinks do not need to be removed if there's potential notability.
 * Inaugural season: says nothing about expansion draft
 * Added.
 * Inaugural season: Probably more info about 2022 offseason, and a new subsection for the 2023 season (or rename inaugural to something else
 * I would rather wait until the season is over before adding a full section.
 * Stadium: you don't need to mention that the panthers are owned by tepper, as the lead says just that
 * The lead must repeat information from the body, therefore it belongs here as well.
 * Headquarters and training facility: the campus, planned to popen in early 2023 - we're way past early 2023, needs updated info
 * There has been no recent coverage of the facility, so I've amended the sentence to 2023 and will keep an eye out for further news.
 * Ownership and management: remove redlink
 * Again, unnecessary.
 * Team records: add a year by year heading before the table (as seen in the article for the revolution)
 * Don't see the point in this.
 * Head coaches: As of October 26, 2022 --> as of 2022 season
 * That line is meant to signify that it was updated on a certain date, which could be mid-season if such a change is made.
 * Again, unnecessary.
 * Team records: add a year by year heading before the table (as seen in the article for the revolution)
 * Don't see the point in this.
 * Head coaches: As of October 26, 2022 --> as of 2022 season
 * That line is meant to signify that it was updated on a certain date, which could be mid-season if such a change is made.
 * Addressed your comments above.  Sounder Bruce  05:20, 4 July 2023 (UTC)