Talk:Chase Young/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bait30 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a crack at reviewing this some time this week. I'll review prose first going down the page by section, then do images, then do references last.  Bait30  Talk 2 me pls? 18:12, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

Lead
 Bait30  Talk 2 me pls? 17:24, 20 October 2020 (UTC)
 * "a feat considered rare for a defensive player": I would reword this per WP:WEASEL. You mention later that he's only the ninth defensive Heisman nominee, so you could just say "a rare/uncommon feat for a defensive player"
 * , is "a rare honor for a defensive player" fine? If honor still sounds too weasel-y, then feat should still be fine. ~ Dissident93 (talk) 21:11, 20 October 2020 (UTC)

Early life

 * Looks good to me.

College career

 * statistics table: I think it would be better to have the sportsref page be linked as a reference rather than as an external link. For example, at the bottom of the table, you can add

 Bait30  Talk 2 me pls? 17:37, 20 October 2020 (UTC)
 * , instead of another column I just cited it at the end of "Career", which is how most player articles have it anyway, including GAs. I can still add to the table if requested though. ~ Dissident93 (talk) 21:12, 20 October 2020 (UTC)

Professional career

 * "best overall prospect in it": The "in it" part is kinda redundant. I think removing it would make the sentence more clear and concise.
 * statistics table: same as above. if you're like me and get very confused when it comes to wikitables, the visual editor is pretty helpful.
 * Agreed and adjusted. ~ Dissident93 (talk) 21:12, 20 October 2020 (UTC)

Personal life
 Bait30  Talk 2 me pls? 17:41, 20 October 2020 (UTC)
 * seems good to me.

Images

 * images are good and relevant, and all copyright and licensing related stuff is there.

 Bait30  Talk 2 me pls? 17:44, 20 October 2020 (UTC)

Overall
, you addressed all my points, so I'm gonna go ahead and pass this.  Bait30  Talk 2 me pls? 22:05, 20 October 2020 (UTC)