Talk:Che in Paona Bazaar

Copyedit, Reliable Sources
I tagged the article using Twinkle, so I thought I'd explain my reasoning here. The tag shouldn't have been removed since the issues are fairly obvious, but I'm assuming good faith on the part of the author who simply might not know any better. The prose can be rewritten easily enough; I might have done so myself, except that I haven't read the book. More concerning are the lack of reliable sources. It appears this article was uploaded to the mainspace without the usual oversight afforded by AfC. Neither of the sources (which are primary), unfortunately, meet the standards of a reliable source. The prose, aside from the issue of grammar, also contains a significant amount of peacock words. Choudhury, I'm not trying to be harsh. But these are problems that need to be addressed, especially as I'm not sure this meets the critera for inclusion. Quinto Simmaco (talk) 13:15, 15 March 2015 (UTC)