Talk:Check (Meek Mill song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Zmbro (talk · contribs) 00:49, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

Grabbing. – zmbro (talk) (cont) 00:49, 25 February 2023 (UTC)

Comments:
 * Could we shorten "Encore, Los Angeles, CA" to "Encore (Los Angeles)"?
 * this is how it is stylized in the liner notes so can't it remain? --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)


 * "Throughout the video" → "In the video"?
 * "American record producers Metro Boomin and Southside handled the song's production, while they also co-wrote it with Mill." since this is the start of the body, how about ""Check" was produced by American record producers Metro Boomin and Southside, who co-wrote it with Meek Mill"? with links of course
 * "Young Thug's 2014 track "Hundreds (I Had A Dream)", which features Mill" → "Young Thug's Mill-featuring track "Hundreds (I Had A Dream)" (2014)"
 * ✅ for the above --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Were these "series of tweets" of note?
 * ❌ they are lyrics, even from the song. --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)


 * You can remove the 2015 from "On June 29, 2015,"
 * "Def Pen" does not strike me as reliable. It honestly looks WP:SELFPUBLISHED
 * Minor but wasn't Consequence still Consequence of Sound in 2015?
 * ✅ for the above --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)


 * "Sweeney said the song consists of "three synth notes and a huge beat"" this reads more like an actual description and not a reaction to it. I'd ditch it here or move it up to comp.
 * I remove the three synth notes from reception but kept huge beat, as that sounds like a review term. --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)


 * "Kevin Goddard depicted that Mill" don't think "depicted" is the right word here
 * "and opined that it "should probably have opened the LP"" we can paraphrase this
 * Do we know who directed the video during the initial shoot? Was it Jordan or was he brought in to finish it? I'd clarify this
 * ✅ for the above --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Is the Young M.A. freestyle notable?
 * Yes, as there is significant coverage. --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)


 * I ran the bot to archive all the URLs but it looks like it missed ref 3
 * ✅ --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)


 * That's all I got. It's been cool reviewing someone other Kanye xP. Should be a GA in no time. – zmbro (talk) (cont) 20:47, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
 * It has been fun working on articles for someone other than Kanye West too; this has now had the fixes implemented if you are ready to pass or not? --K. Peake 08:54, 27 February 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ easy peasy – zmbro (talk) (cont) 13:09, 27 February 2023 (UTC)