Talk:Cheetah reintroduction in India/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 04:47, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 04:04, 29 April 2024 (UTC)

Comments
I'll be reviewing this. Wolverine XI  ( talk to me ) 04:04, 29 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks for taking this up. Let me know the comments. Magentic Manifestations (talk) 06:16, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Let me look at this now. Expect comments in a few hours. Wolverine XI   ( talk to me ) 18:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC)

Review

 * It would be better to state the date
 * Done


 * Why are you repeating the same info?
 * Modified the line to indicate the reasons


 * to Following the local extinction,
 * Done


 * Where is the wild?
 * Added


 * We are missing punctuations
 * Added


 * "The" is not needed
 * Done


 * In the east
 * Done


 * What?
 * Rephrased


 * Why the caps?
 * Changed


 * This is false. Does this refer to Asiatic cheetahs? The source is also 15 years old.
 * It refers to asiatic cheetahs. There is only one litter ever born to captive animals. Giving an alternate source as well.


 * What?
 * Corrected


 * link separated to Split (phylogenetics)
 * Not clear


 * In steps?
 * Re-phrased


 * It was one birth
 * It was four cubs? Anyways, changed.


 * Why?
 * Corrected


 * Any information on the impacts of reintroducing cheetahs to these parks?
 * Have added a section.


 * For background, please only use journals, books or scholarly articles
 * Done for the most part except the recent record of asiatic cheetah breeding (CNN)


 * Shouldn't project cheetah fall under Re-introduction plans
 * Modified the first title to early re-introduction plans; If I move project cheetah under it, it will create too many tiers


 * In see also please remove all the other non Acinonyx jubatus articles and add Project cheetah as further information. Basically, just remove the see also section.
 * Removed.


 * More to come. Wolverine XI   ( talk to me ) 16:34, 2 May 2024 (UTC)