Talk:Chelsea Brummet

Comment
Make "Chelsea Jean Brummet" your title! You state what the subject is but make sure you add her name in BOLD. The lead section is a clear summary and you do a good job making sure you talk about it all in your article. You have no citations in your sandbox. You need to make sure you add those or it is considered plagiarism. Make sure you cite textbooks and not just blogs. You use simple words and make the article easy to comprehend. You also do a good job of letting the reader decide for themselves and use no persuasive writing. You also use no (I/we) or (you) that is great! Your format is consistent with the rest of Wikipedia but make sure you use the same font size and same BOLD for everything! You should also try and find some pictures to include in your article.Maggie2023 (talk) 20:10, 4 December 2019 (UTC)

Carsons comments
Good introduction sentence gives the reader a good idea of what the article is going to be about. The lead section is strong and gives a good summary of what the main topic of the article is. The structure of the article is nice it has clear sub sections that state what each sub section will be about. May want to make the title Chelsea Jean Brummet. The content in this article is revenant to the topic and the balance is neutral does not show any bias. May want to add a picture of the person or a picture of one of the acting jobs Chelsea had. There are five sources cited at the end but only four of them were cited in the article and may want cite the others a little more. The information given on the article is relevant and gives comprehensive coverage of Chelsea Brummet. Lakecl (talk) 19:11, 23 October 2019 (UTC)