Talk:Chemistry/GA1

GA Review
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Hi, unfortunately this article fails to meet the Good Article criteria. Issues include:


 * Inline citations go after punctuation marks, per WP:FN.
 * Remove obvious self-referencing phrasing, such as "system (see subdisciplines)." – when this article is printed out on paper, this information will not be useful.
 * Far too much information goes unreferenced, especially the "Basic concepts", which takes up about half of the article.

Feel free to resubmit this article for a renomination after it has improved.

Gary King ( talk ) 22:26, 30 June 2008 (UTC)