Talk:Cherry on Top/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:13, 3 September 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * and produced by → I think "while production was handled by" sounds better here, but it's your choice
 * Done


 * A corresponding music video → "accompanying" would fit better here
 * Done


 * and released on 20 April 2014 → and premiered simultaneously with the single's release
 * Done

Infobox

 * Flawless ;)

Background and composition

 * and produced by → same as in the lead
 * Done


 * high-tempo → uptempo
 * Done

Critical reception

 * and "3 Chances" → and album track "3 Chances" (for context)
 * Done


 * calling it party of Wish Bone's "magically imaginative mental joyride" → I don't really know what "party" should mean here
 * Done – fixed; my bad. Carbrera (talk) 22:15, 9 September 2017 (UTC).


 * He liked that the song "display[ed] → say "recording" here for alternation
 * Done

Music video

 * the cinematography was orchestrated by → "orchestrated" is the wrong word here
 * Done


 * Were the three short films eventually made? If not, you can state at the very end of the paragraph something like: "Plans remained unmaterialized"
 * Done

Personnel

 * from Wish Bone liner notes → from the liner notes of Wish Bone
 * Done

Copy-violation

 * 31.0% is super!

Outcome
for 7 days. Great job! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:57, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
 * – All done. Thank you very much. Carbrera (talk) 22:15, 9 September 2017 (UTC).
 * Gladly passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:26, 10 September 2017 (UTC)