Talk:Cheryl Heller

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 29 August 2019 and 19 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Francescacast. Peer reviewers: Delize78, Adam.Klekman, Christay817, Jokerridd101.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:20, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Non-neutral language, tangential details
Phrases like "helping them innovate and launch new products and open new markets" and "with a mission to improve the environment" are not encyclopedic language, but typical PR-speak usually found in resumes and other official publications from involved sources. A Wikipedia article should phrase information from an uninvolved observer's perspective - without subjective buzzwords and adulation. Also, the amount of grants from "Ideas that Matter" is irrelevant within a biographical article. As developer of this initiative for a separate company she doesn't own this initiative nor does she decide about the initiative's grants in any way (afaik). Also also, the article doesn't mention any major educational activities, so calling her "educator" is misleading. GermanJoe (talk) 16:22, 30 October 2017 (UTC)

profiled
I looked at some of the sources for the claim that Heller ((tq|has been profiled through articles in the New York Times, the Boston Globe, BusinessWeek}}. Based on the results, I'm going to remove that claim.

https://www.nytimes.com/search?query=%22Sheryl+Heller%22 https://www3.bostonglobe.com/queryResult/search?q=Sheryl%20Heller&p1=BGMenu_Search&arc404=true https://www.bloomberg.com/search?query=%22Sheryl%20Heller%22 Vexations (talk) 03:24, 20 December 2019 (UTC)

NPOV language
Also I did some work to remove some of the puffery/NPOV language. There probably is some more, but if you find this acceptable, feel free to remove that flag. If not, keep it. I trust you. --Theredproject (talk) 20:12, 14 March 2020 (UTC)