Talk:Chess boxing/GA1

GA Review
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 * Format references per WP:CITE/ES
 * Cut down on external links per WP:EL
 * Remove period in image caption per WP:MOS
 * Expand lead to better summarize entire article per WP:LEAD

Gary King ( talk ) 02:00, 14 July 2008 (UTC)


 * "Chess Boxing World Championship, Chessbase News, 5 December 2003" is not using cite web is it? Appears to be citation; use one template or the other but not both.
 * "Kirsan Ilyumzhinov As A Chess Boxer!, FIDE" – no accessdate
 * Any ref for "If a contestant does not make a move in the chessround, he will be issued a warning by the referee. At the second warning the contestant will be disqualified."?

Gary King ( talk ) 19:55, 18 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Done. JoshuaZ (talk) 20:09, 18 July 2008 (UTC)


 * There are too many small paragraphs in " History" causing it to not flow well. Gary King ( talk ) 20:31, 18 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Condensed now. Is that better? JoshuaZ (talk) 20:36, 18 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Looks better. Passing Gary King ( talk ) 20:39, 18 July 2008 (UTC)