Talk:Chickaboom!/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vaughan J. (talk · contribs) 09:12, 20 July 2023 (UTC)



I'm gonna try to complete this today! — VAUGHAN J.  ( TALK ) 09:12, 20 July 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox needs some changes:
 * Recorded – "The Lab, Auckland" → "The Lab (Auckland)", and this should be at the studio parameter instead, as the recorded parameter should include the dates of recording for this album per template. ✅ by reviewer
 * Genre – Replace hlist with bullet points per template, and uncapitalise rockabilly ✅ by reviewer
 * Label – Replace hlist with bullet points per template, "Neilson Records" → "Neilson (independent)", and wikilink Outside Music ✅ by reviewer
 * Producer – Replace commas with bullet points per template ✅ by reviewer


 * "released in February 2020." → "released on 14 February 2020, by Neilson Records and Outside Music." – you gotta mention the labels and the actual release date ✅
 * Pipe country to Country music ✅
 * I'd suggest mentioning that it debuted at number 8 on the Official New Zealand Music Chart. Don't source it as it is sourced in the charts section. ✅

Production

 * End image caption sentence with full stop. ✅
 * "the songs are inspired" → "the songs in the album are inspired" ✅
 * "sound of rockabilly" → "sound of rockabilly" per WP:OVERLINK ✅

Release and promotion

 * "released as the first single from" → "released as the lead single from" ✅
 * "In February 2021," → "On 19 February 2021," ✅

Critical reception

 * Retitle to "Reception" ✅
 * Everything else looks good!

Track listing

 * Looks good!

Credits and personnel

 * Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio) ✅
 * "producer" → "production" and pipe it to Record producer ✅
 * Pipe cover to Album cover ✅
 * "mixing engineer" → "mixing" and pipe it to Audio mixing (recorded music) ✅
 * Wikilink liner notes ✅

Charts

 * Looks good!

Release history

 * "Neilson Records" → "Neilson (independent)" ✅
 * Remove Southband as it isn't a record label, it is a record store in NZ. ✅
 * Replace commas with hlist ✅
 * Capitalise "Digital download" in deluxe edition row ✅

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of these issues are fixed; that was faster than I surprisingly expected! — VAUGHAN J.  ( TALK ) 09:34, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
 * @: I see you haven't made any changes to this article, after almost 4 days of this review being on hold. — VAUGHAN J.  ( TALK ) 01:34, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
 * My apologies, I'll make the changes asap. --Prosperosity (talk) 01:41, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Done! Thank you so much for reviewing the page. --Prosperosity (talk) 01:53, 23 July 2023 (UTC)
 * now; no worries! Now the article looks way better than it was before! Amazing job! — VAUGHAN J.  ( TALK ) 01:59, 23 July 2023 (UTC)