Talk:Chikurubi Prison

Needs a rewrite
No doubt this is a noteworthy encyclopaedia entry, but in its current form it is written like a call to activism instead of a factual description.

Suggestions: - FMalan (talk) 14:31, 24 December 2013 (UTC)
 * The body should be split into paragraphs, and should only report facts.
 * There should be more citations (if possible).
 * Moral judgements should not be part of the article.
 * I created this as a stub, but haven't been back here for quite a while. The text that's been added since them looks to be a copyvio of this webpage, so I think we should revert back to my original. Hopefully someone with more knowledge on the subject can expand it further.