Talk:Chipper Lowell

What about "Blink"?
The article has lost all reference to the show "Blink!" even though it is clear from the cited sources that that show was a significant part of the subject's performance history. So far as I could find, none of the cited sources even mentions "The Chipper Experience", which is now the only show mentioned in the article. The article is substantive enough now that, IMHO, it's time to introduce some section headings.

A performance chronology, supported by WP:RS citations, would go a long way toward helping the reader mentally organize all of the disparate information in the article. Kudos to the subject (who is himself an editor of the article) for mostly resisting the temptation toward puffery (obviously excepting the uncited "rave reviews" he mentions-- much better to cite one and quote it directly), but without some more structure, the article still reads more like a press release than an encyclopedia entry. --Rnickel (talk) 15:05, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

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