Talk:Chitty Chitty Death Bang/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer:  That Ole Cheesy Dude  ( Talk to the hand! ) 00:08, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, a few changes and it's ready to go.


 * Specific
 * Each first sentence of each paragraph begins with "Chitty Chitty Death Bang", try changing that (it's used 4 times in the lead only).
 * A "1 year old" should be "one-year-old"
 * Nicaragua needs a link
 * "other various characters" various other.
 * "Peter lost his watch of the Dukes of Hazzard." This needs clarification.
 * Could you be more specific? Pedro J.  the rookie 01:33, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, what does it mean for one? It doesn't seem to make a lot of sense to me.  That Ole Cheesy Dude  ( Talk to the hand! ) 03:20, 29 June 2011 (UTC)


 * "When Stewie is packing he takes a bag of Cheerios with him" How is that a reference. Should be removed.
 * "called said that" Doesn't make sense. One or the other
 * Also the sentence with "called said that" in it needs quote marks.
 * Again tv.yahoo is not a very reliable source.
 * Again? Well anyway, I disagree since the page is owned by Yahoo, but in any case I added a TV Guide link. Pedro J.  the rookie 01:33, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
 * TV Guide is an even more unreliable source, remove it. I'll accept the Yahoo one, begrudgingly.  That Ole Cheesy Dude  ( Talk to the hand! ) 03:20, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Everything else is taken care of. Pedro J.  the rookie 01:33, 29 June 2011 (UTC)


 * General
 * The cultural references section reads like a list of trivia.


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * A few changes needed here and there, room for improvement.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): (citations to reliable sources):  (OR):
 * Pretty good overall, just one unreliable ref.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): (focused):
 * Perfic'
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Perfic'
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Perfic'.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * Okay that's a pass, good job working on this. [[Image:Teeth.png|16px]]  That Ole Cheesy Dude  ( Talk to the hand! ) 00:25, 30 June 2011 (UTC)