Talk:Chocolatier

Stub
Lets make a group to expand this! 203.63.9.181 (talk) 06:54, 1 February 2008 (UTC)

Just added tone tag. There are many instances throughout article, but examples are as follows. Does this need a complete re-write?--98.237.145.101 (talk) 11:42, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
 * In just Education section: there are no facts in the whole first paragraph, it is written as a series of generalizations.
 * We should avoid use of terms like 'generally', 'are said to' (by whom?), 'may be considered' (by whom?).
 * In third paragraph, again, no facts, just opinion.

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Pronunciation
Would it be useful to include the French, British and American pronunciations of this word?--Johnsoniensis (talk) 23:30, 12 April 2019 (UTC)

Tone doesn't suit Wikipedia
Hi! I've been slowly chipping away at fixing some grammatical errors on this article, but I feel largely that the overall tone doesn't really match with the style of Wikipedia articles. I don't feel confident enough to do large rewrites as I haven't been an editor long, but if someone more skilled than myself would consider taking a crack at it, I'd be appreciative! KesingtonGore (talk) 19:51, 3 June 2023 (UTC)