Talk:Choctaw/Archives/2021/October

Lead is too long
The Lead is much too long, as was identified in an assessment by others several years ago. It should be about four paragraphs. I may make an attempt to shorten it. This article has many good elements and covers both history and 20th-century important US court decisions affecting Choctaw people. It deserves to be cleaned up.Parkwells (talk) 14:01, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Four years later, but I completely agree with you. This entire is unreadable due to excessive length. Yuchitown (talk) 00:27, 21 October 2021 (UTC)Yuchitown

Assessment comment
Substituted at 11:35, 29 April 2016 (UTC)