Talk:Choctaw/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 02:43, 5 November 2010 (UTC)

Hello! I will be reviewing this article for potential GA status. My review should be posted shortly. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:43, 5 November 2010 (UTC)

For these reasons, I'm going to decline to list the article at this time. I would encourage you to renominate once the above issues have been addressed. You might also consider seeking peer review. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:48, 5 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Per WP:LEAD, the article's lead section should be no more than 4 paragraphs
 * The article is quite long, and contains many (inconsistently formatted) blockquotes, some of which should be removed or better incorporated
 * There are a number of citation-needed tags
 * References are inconsistently formatted, and some consistent only of bare URLs - see WP:CITE
 * Please see WP:NPOV - article should be more neutrally worded