Talk:Chollas Creek/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dionysius Miller (talk · contribs) 20:33, 1 February 2024 (UTC)

Initiative notification: Hello! I'm Dionysius Miller I'll be initiating your (long awaited) good article nominee review! Over the course of today (2/1/2024) and tomorrow (2/2/2024) I'll be putting together your initial assessment. Most likely there'll be a short or medium list of things to fix up some for a pass. I look forward to working with you and hope for success.  Dionysius Miller talk 20:34, 1 February 2024 (UTC)

Review 1.1
Here's your first-pass review. There could be additional points raised but this is at the very least a place to start and hopefully finish. Once the issues are addressed to your liking, I'll get another review in which will take the title of 1.2, and don't worry if 1.2 doesn't give you the pass, I think you are absolutely near GA status for this article and I'll help out however I can. As long as you need to get the article to GA, you have and we can keep progressing. I'll be with you every step of the way. Do give me warning if you have to take a break or leave of absence and I'll do the same. Godspeed!  Dionysius Miller talk 22:19, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
 * I have merged the short paragraphs into other paragraphs that are appropriate and have similar content. I have removed the citations in the lead section per MOS:CITELEAD. I then ran the article content through Microsoft Word, to find any spelling or grammar errors. Please let me know what other modifications are necessary.-- RightCow LeftCoast ( Moo ) 04:05, 6 February 2024 (UTC)