Talk:Chris Candido Memorial Tag Team Tournament/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri (talk · contribs) 16:37, 4 January 2014 (UTC)

I'll take this one. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 16:37, 4 January 2014 (UTC) Good Article Checklist
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Comments: This article has a few issues. Several issues holding this back. Otherwise, not too bad. Please fix it and I should be able to pass it. Placing it on hold now. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 06:28, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Disambig links: OK
 * Reference check:OK
 * "The tournament was well received overall." - you mean "well-received"
 * Fixed
 * Dates 	August 16, 2005 – August 16, 2005 - Only needs one date. Please fix.
 * Due to template, it requires a start and finish date. I'd have to leave one off and not sure how that would work.
 * TNA editor Bill Banks' in his "Bank Shot" column - why do we need the name of his column?
 * Fixed
 * "onImpact!" spacing
 * From the copy and paste, fixed.
 * " Sabin left the ring after this due to an injury." Please expand and note that this was not scripted - given the nature of the event these sorts of things need to be highlighted and have some form of announcement to prevent confusion.
 * Fixed
 * "Chris Sabin received a broken jaw as a result of a kick from Shelley during the final round." - Choppy sentences and prose.
 * Fixed
 * "He suffered a back injury, but ended up appearing at the PWG show that Sabin was forced to miss." - Intentional, scripted, cite please. (even if it is right below)
 * Fixed
 * "Sean Waltman (pictured) missed TNA's Unbreakable pay-per-viewevent." and its image are not really relevant to this article. Please remove it.
 * I disagree. Waltman won the tournament and the whole tournament was to honor Candido and to become number-one contender to the tag team titles technically. Waltman missed the match he won. I think it is very relevant.
 * "TNA management were very upset with Sean Waltman after he failed to participate in the Four Way Elimination Tag Team match. This was due to him being one-half of the winners of the Chris Candido Memorial Tag Team Tournament.[21]Waltman was in Orlando and was dressed to compete, but did not arrive in time to participate in his match.[22] He was not used again by TNA until January 15, 2006 when he appeared at their Final Resolution PPV event.[23]" - Is copied text from the other article. Please fix the prose. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 06:28, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Actually, this is the original as I wrote this one first. I wrote Unbreakable and this at the same time. Re-done.
 * Thanks for the review, I hope I have fixed the issues.-- Will C  18:25, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Passed. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 05:00, 11 January 2014 (UTC)